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Hi, I’m Slater. I write stories that pop in my mind, hope you enjoy.
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Aug 26, 2022
You definitely have the dialogue and the comedy was good. I love the world and the dynamic of Caramello and Chiffon was definitely unique. Really the only issue I had so far was the fight scenes, but it’s so small compared to the real goal. Like, how would a blow to the shoulder cause to go bleed from a mallet, unless it has some spiked on it. But it’s really good so far
To:AWiddleStar
Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking of how to exactly introduce all 7 in a timely manner, I’ll probably tweak it in the conning days, or at least make to less wordy.
Aug 23, 2022
Really nasty. I love it. You did a good job at making his job sound like shit, literally.
A common man’s story, I like it so far. I like when stories talk about the little guys, but extraordinary people.
Aug 22, 2022
You don’t know how much I love Emma. This is super fun, glad I could find time to read this.
God, it took me back to when I was doing that club thing my freshman year LMAO. I love this, it’s super refreshing to see a college story. Nothing wrong with HS, but I can just relate to this a lot more.
I always like openings that puts in the middle of things, making me figure out some stuff. I can see the beginning of chemistry, I always like it when they don’t get along at first.
The intro is certainly fitting for a rom-com. While the perspective switch was a little jarring, I didn't lose anything. Overall I can't wait to read more. Kept a smile on my face.
Aug 04, 2022
To:KawaZukiYama
Thanks! I try my best to make everything as cool sounding as possible
Jul 06, 2022
To:Makech
Yes, yes! I am very happy with how it turned out.
Jul 02, 2022
To:Taylor Victoria
Thanks! Hope you're enjoying the rest of the story!
Jun 15, 2022
I had so much fun making this chapter, it’s really fun just fleshing out personalities of different people
Ah, the joys the future!
Jun 13, 2022
To:F.C Fondness
It's always been a thing, I was just brave enough to make a story on it lol
Jun 11, 2022
Yeahhh, I’m sure he’ll get something back lmao