Aug 19, 2021
I know I'm a bit late to the party and I might not be able to give any more than what has already been said, but this was a splendid read. Great character establishment and execution. The chapter flowed really well alongside the dialogues. Am ready to see this on the leaderboard!
Also, I hope this isn't imposing, but it would be brilliant if you could read mine give some feedback and pointers, thank you!