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Sep 05, 2021
Thank you for writing such an amazing story. It was really enjoyable. Really great. I hope that you win, I will make sure to vote when it is done to do so
To:Arterberry
Oh wow I see. Impressive on how your English is better then mine
Lol it's well deserved praise. Oh can't wait for the sequel. Ayumi has still got to fulfill the promise. Let's see if she will manage to do it and go back to her family without fully losing her sanity
Btw are you British or maybe Australian?
For aparoxys it is. Xykoss just obeys Ayumi while the little girl had her own opinions
Haha thanks
Lol I agree
He is really well designed and a unique character but I he is not to my taste lol (don't want to give spoilers here)
Yeah he looks boring but his character is nice but a little cliché if you ask me
Oh wow, amazing. The fight is only getting better and better. Ayumi has snapped. Let's see how a furious ayumi will fight. Don't think this fight can get any better then this but I will have to wait and see in the finally
Oh wow only one more chapter, I see. It's going to be sad to see this coming to an end. Well done so far. I really enjoyed your story. It's really amazing how you managed to come up with this world and all the paroxys. I'm rooting for you in this contest!
To:Nikon
Yeah, that's true. Again, her paroxys has its mind in its own and can act on its will. I don't think Ayumi can force her out to use like she did with Xykoss. Ayumi let's her take over, like she had done in the prison 🤔
Ohh so Ayumis sanity is wavering (I guess from the title)
Lol poor Dimitri
To:Nordic Clive
The little girl had a mind of its own and her own perception
