Sep 02, 2021
To:Dougulas Kaien
That's very weird of you to leave a comment like this on someone else's novel. I really liked every chapter so far including the first one, so I disagree with you on your suggestion for the author to change anything from chapter 1! In fact, I hope they don't! It was a perfect way to start a novel off, and it hooked me immediately FROM the very fact that it was so dark. No one wants to read little kid-friendly stuff and be bored reading it all the time like your skeleton novel (no offense). I remember as a child I hated reading kid-friendly stuff and subsequently reading manga that was kid-friendly. Honestly, this is just a sketchy comment you left in general lol, and I'm a fan of Number# so I just feel the need to defend it.
