4/15/22

Bus Driver shortage, so I'm at home.

A guy, in a novel review on Inkitt, said the book was "disjointed and uncoordinated" making it "hard to comprehend" and that "There is need for improvement."

Word-for-Word, they said "The book is disjointed and uncoordinated making it hard to comprehend. There is need for improvement."

I responded with this analogy, word-for-word, but I rearranged it due to the hard to comprehend part being an afterthought:

Bruh... saying "There is need for improvement" is like giving a man a gun and telling him to shoot AT a target in front of him. "At" implies a general DIRECTION. It doesn't specify anything.

"Hard to comprehend" is just telling them to HIT the target, end of story.

Let's say the target has 11 rings, with the eleventh being the bullseye, the third yellow ring. Ring 1 is the bullseye, and the outer ring is 11.

Saying that it's "disjointed and uncoordinated" on top of it is akin to TELLING him to HIT the target, SOMEWHERE within the first NINE rings(counting bullseye) and EXPECTING him to hit somewhere within the first THREE to FIVE.

Gen/Esis published a new chapter of "I don't need a Cat-girl making it worse!" Which MADE. MY. FUCKING. DAY!

Shoutout to Gen/Esis for the amazing work she does.

I went to Mug 'n Bun. If you ever come to Indianapolis, the house rootbeer can NOT be missed. There's only one, though...

Discovered I like iced chai lattes.