Folly of the Wisemen

Indra, a dangerous revolutionary, surrenders to his enemy the Triloka Empire, catching them off guard with irresistible proposition - the revelation of his deepest secrets. However, he sets forth a condition, demanding to collaborate solely with the empire's revered first sword, Arshia.

Inside the impenetrable confines of the nations's deadliest prison, the daring revolutionary unveils a mesmerizing tale. Weaving a narrative that spans from his humble origins in the labyrinthine streets of Ambar to his wizardly pursuits in the university, and ultimately, to the zeneth of his ascent as the revolutionary leader of the Asura.

Would really appreciate a comment or two. A criticism or encouragement. Slander me, so I could be better at this.