Quantum Mage: I Alone Control All The Elements
Quantum Mage: I Alone Control All The Elements
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Aug 26, 2025
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A Shining Star on Honeyfeed

It's been a while since I've read something that dug as deep as Quantum Mage.

Primot is a great example to me of the most annoying type of person that I can't help for. He's so egregiously wrong most the time, a massive idiot, yet it's easy to see exactly why he makes the wrong choice over and over again. When writing unreliable protagonists, it's easy to give the game away, but Super keeps things tight while showing how Primot's screw ups and Pov affect the story and the reader's impression.

The story also takes great care to focus on all its characters. It's small cast is able to take full advantage of the word count to let each person have their time to shine. The world never overtakes the character either. The mix here between worldbuilding and characterisation is great, and there's no part that really drags.

In the contest, Super's work stands out as a shining example of what an Isekai can be. Absolutely recommend everyone read this.

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