This one drops you straight into the action. A lot of people die, there is no mercy.

Asta/Iwen, who I think is the main character, is an insufferable little prick at the beginning, but he mellows out. It felt like he took a back seat for the majority of the story, though.

It is a bit difficult to follow at times, the story jumps from perspective to perspective.

It felt as though I was missing context several times throughout the story.

There is a portion where they mention a legendary weapon being with a fallen military company, and I vaguely recall someone earlier in the story being told they can’t bring a legendary weapon, but the legendary weapon was there anyways. The way it was portrayed, it seemed to me like the banner that the group was flying was the weapon in question, but there was no mention of the banner when they actually retrieved the weapon.

Took a second read to piece together what I could.

Excellent premise, minor grammar issues.