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[FUCK. YOU. FUCK YOUR COMFORT, FUCK YOUR "RULES"]
At the halfway point of adulthood and childhood, Neri is left to suffer with the consequences of his actions after a house fire. Isolation.
[YOU DON'T DESERVE TO READ MY NOVEL, BUT I DESERVE AT LEAST A LITTLE FEEDBACK, MORE THAN "IT'S GOOD" OR SILENCE IF IT'S BAD, AFTER 3 YEARS OF WRITING EVERY SINGLE FUCKING DAY. FULL OF PAIN, TEARS, AND HATRED. My novel is more important to me than you.]
Clinging onto the past and kid he once was (Bliss), he overdoses and makes a decision that 'fixes' reality. He disassociates into the darkness under his blanket for the very last time and into his surreal, lucid dream between past and present. He ventures the 3 layers of his mind: Illusion, Life, Reality. Repairing his fragmented brain through memories, horror, and raw, emotional truths, he'll unravel the mess of consequences he's caught in and mend his final identity, forming a life anew at the end of his complex of nostalgia and shifted morals.
T.W: EATING DISORDERS, BODY HORROR, DRUGS, SELF HARM, DEPRESSION. ALTHOUGH, THIS FIRST BIT IS VERY TAME COMPARED TO THE REST OF THE BOOK.
NOT the GENERIC kind just because some parts are based on pop culture, but if you like LIMINAL spaces, WEIRDCORE, DREAMCORE, or games like OMORI, you're bound to love this (mainly included in the 'Delusion' sections)
NOT STUPIDLY LIMITED BY GENRES. W.I.P, still in drafts. This has been passion-fueled for 3 years and all I've gotten is nothing. So please... The least you could do is criticize. I just need feedback, good and bad (preferably constructive, obviously - don't be a degenerate), ANYTHING to keep going, to know what this story is like in another perspective and to know if the PLOT is good or not, not necessarily the grammar. I just need this to be worth it at the end of everything I've been through for this. EVERY. SINGLE. WORD. IS. INTENTIONAL. EVERY. So it may not be the best, but I'll improve. Isn't that what you'll help me with?
T.W: EATING DISORDERS, BODY HORROR, DRUGS, SELF HARM, DEPRESSION. ALTHOUGH, THIS FIRST BIT IS VERY TAME COMPARED TO THE REST OF THE BOOK.
NOT the GENERIC kind just because some parts are based on pop culture, but if you like LIMINAL spaces, WEIRDCORE, DREAMCORE, or...
