Candle in the Rain, Inferno in the Wind

I'm being given a referral to a literary agency!! As such, I have been advised to remove any online copies.

I would like to think HF for all the support I've been given, pointing out flaws and weaknesses in my writing, which I have striven to improve! Thank you so much!!

I'm a novice, so my work will be rough around the edges to say the least. I would appreciate any and all forms of feedback! Don't go easy on me, hit me with the hard truths, that I may take them and use them to improve! m(._.)m