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My masochistic tendencies led me to engineering.
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Jun 14, 2022
To:HankEatsGames
Thank you for your feedback and that question. I very much appreciate it. I totally missed the the fact that he should have a different voice. I'll add that to my revision notes.
Thanks!
Jun 13, 2022
To:Feyblue
I'll keep that in mind. Didn't realize at that it was that it was a jarring switch. Thank you for your feedback once again. I appreciate it.
Thank you for your elaborate feedback. I very much appreciate it. Some awkward wordings might be intentional, but some parts are not I probably just missed it while revising.
Nov 07, 2021
Thought to just pass by but ended up reading the entire chapter.