Apr 24, 2022
To:Momentie
Thanks for the feedback as usual. There are various reasons Mel was selected that will be explored later, although a huge part of it is Hina's trust in her. (Plus Mel is pretty clever, which will also be explored later)
Sisters are a bit callous to the death of others due to their nature, although you do have a pretty good point, I'm not projecting the mood as well as I should have. I originally intended these final chapters to have a much more somber mood, but I changed some plot details cause I wanted to work with certain characters, and the actions that would have led to those circumstances didn't work with what I had written.
The reason why the Overlords, Shadows, and the Reaper haven't attacked the Tree will also be explained. There is a good reason for that.
Alcohol a lot of it is scavenged, (Per 67's orders...) but some is fermented as well.
(Maybe I should do I world-building chapter tbh...)
You make a lot of good points that I need to address. Ultimately if I can't project feelings properly, which is the goal of my writing, then I need to rework some stuff.
Thanks again!!