Jan 17, 2022
There were some REALLY good lines in here, like “Recalling her face was like trying to remember the specific details of a dream- vivid and real in the moment, but formless and blurred after waking.” Some of the time, things seemed to just kind of happen without any time to let an idea set in. This kind of reminds me of the opening of FLCL: Progressive (which is the best part FLCL: Progressive, by the way!). Definitely keep it up!