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Apr 13, 2025
Honestly, this is pretty peak for what gets posted on this website. Even if this is the end, I'm already happy with it. Can't wait to see what you do next!
This is good, like really good. Love the dialogue and the start of it has me super intrigued. I'm going to have to make some time to read the rest of this!
I'm definitely curious to see where this goes. However, while this challenge does make you write pretty fast, you should definitely proofread your work before posting it. Keep writing! I want to see you improve and succeed! There's some pretty creative stuff in here like the seed.
Cool start! The beginning definitely gave me Batman vibes, and I'm here for it.
Apr 06, 2025
I had a hard time writing this one without it being too boring, so I ended up cutting it as short as I could. The next chapter will not take as long as this one did, promise!
Mar 24, 2025
To:Kalakar
Thanks! I tried to think of the most “only in America” way to go possible
To:unitsperunit
Thanks, I got it commissioned! Wowo really did a great job with it!
Mar 23, 2025
I wish I had the confidence as a writer to make up something like "spit heist".
Absolute cinema.
This is very entertaining. I loved the whole thing, but make sure you proofread your work. I'm definitely binging the rest of this.
I liked the way that the dialogue was formatted. Also, I really liked the word painting that you did in this introduction. It really sets the scene well.
Interesting start. Definitely seems like it's going to be an isekai sort of scenario.
If I had to offer any advice, make sure to check the formatting of your text on this website because it can be different from a Word doc.
I like the class war aspect of this, definitely going in an interesting direction.
Mar 16, 2025
I'm not going to lie, I did NOT expect that guy to be 23 at all.
I like that the protagonist isn't what society would consider a "good guy", but he is redeemable. The interaction at the end definitely shows that.
