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Feb 14, 2024
Liked the way you conveyed feelings. Also the details are great!
Looking forward to chapter 1 😇
Dec 31, 2023
Will it be in Japanese or English? It was little hard for me to read through 😞
Dec 25, 2023
Man you really need some work on your way of revealing the story. The intentions of nexus were unclear. Also you didn’t add any plot or lay down the base which is why it felt less appealing, also it felt like you were rushing which made the chapter unorganized. I hope you can improve the way you convey what you have on your mind.
Dec 23, 2023
Interesting way to phrase but some lines felt repetitive 😞
Dec 11, 2023
Small yet very appealing, your story is captivating. However, if you could elaborate a bit more on the ending, that would be fantastic. Oh could fix the line rules by life it should be ruled by life. :)
Nov 29, 2023
To:Mario Nakano 64
I see. In that case maybe you could try gathering more info on the dish you are going to use and present it in appealing way. Maybe you can follow some famous cooks recipe like Masaharu Morimoto, Gordom Ramsy etc. Overall the concept is nice
To:J.P.B
thanks for the compliment! :)
I liked Rika's plot. Good choice. Although it would've nice if you explained the dish she made to make more appealing . : )