Apr 09, 2022
To:Deleted User
You're too kind! I fully understand - I think I'll make sure I buff up the other character's personalities as soon as I can.
Also, instead of starting with the Shifters invading the house, perhaps I'll change the beginning to a family event with his mother/father to build up the stakes?
Thank you again for your feedback, I'll do my best to keep what you said in mind!