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I'm just a writer/reader who's got stories to tell and time to kill.
My favorite genres include; Comedy, fantasy, magic, action, adventure and the occasional isekai(and probably some more that I can't remember).
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Aug 24, 2024
You missed a quotation mark here and there, but good chapter (although it felt a little short). As usual I look forward to the next one. Keep up the good work👍
Aug 14, 2024
Overall the chapter was well wrote (albeit a little shocking at times) and I enjoyed reading it.
But if you have the time I'd recommend re-reading it and scanning for errors.
Jul 24, 2024
Well, that was a thing...
Good chapter, I was waiting for more to be released so I could read them in bulk but I lost patience.
Keep it up, I'm getting curious.
Jun 18, 2024
What a twist, I highly doubt anyone could've guessed Raze's past before your recent chapters(Or at least I certainly couldn't). My only complaint would be that it was a little hard to tell who was talking sometimes.
All in all though, a good read. Keep it up.
Jun 07, 2024
Very well done, definitely another dark chapter, it felt a little short but I enjoyed it, keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
On another note, I know it's a little late, but you mentioned another novel in a previous reply, are you planning on publishing it on Honeyfeed also?
Jun 04, 2024
Calling a phoenix a chicken is no less then I'd expect from someone like Raze.
By the way I think I saw a typo during the party's expedition into the 'Sailor Death Zone'
"...if we got any closer, our ship would mean the same fate as the others..." Did you mean meet? Anyways, good work, I look forward to your next chapter.
Jun 02, 2024
To:Ivern
Okay, good luck with work, and don't push yourself to release chapters. I'd personally rather you take the time to produce the best you can as opposed to rushing out an unfinished product. Again I wish you good luck👍
May 30, 2024
"...It would be useful to get someone else on side..."
I think you meant to put an 'our' in there(Back when Bryson was convincing Sable to aid his plot or rather his scheme). But otherwise good work.
The final paragraph seems incomplete, was that intentional?
Been awhile hasn't it? I would've liked to read sooner but I've been occupied as of late. Here's hoping I can catch up.
Apr 18, 2024
Been a minute hasn't it? I would've read earlier but stuff got in the way.
I noticed it's also been awhile since your last chapter release are you still writing this book?
Oct 13, 2023
Well, that was pretty damn grim.
Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Sep 22, 2023
To:minatika
Probably not. It doesn't even have a real ending right now. I left it here so anyone willing to give me advice on the rewrite could do so before I get started on it (Whenever that may be).
Basically, unless you're specifically looking to help a newbie writer out, it's probably in your best interests to read another book, as much as it pains me to say/type.
Thank you for your time, apologies if I disappointed.
Aug 22, 2023
Sorry about the incredibly late release, needless to say, I've been busy. Hopefully I have enough free time to get back to schedule but I make no promises.
Thanks for reading.
Aug 13, 2023
Candlemaker definitely has a Brothers Grim style creepy sound to it.
I would've read earlier but I've been occupied as of late and only recently got a little free time.
Keep it up.
