Jul 29, 2022
To:McMolly
Thank you so much for your feedback! I much appreciate it! I'm also glad you've been enjoying it so far!
This certainly is the weakest chapter as, as you noted, it was quite rushed. Admittedly I struggled to write this chapter (damn writers block!) especially the initial interaction between Isaac and Sky. But I do plan on coming back to it, and hopefully add some extra dialogue and scenes between them.
Some of the other chapters I may have rushed through as I felt like I may have been lingering too long on those areas. But I'm certainly going to go back through them and see what I can add and improve on them!
I also apologize for the grammar and spelling errors! I do plan on re-reading through this, once it's complete, to fix them. This is still my first draft after all.
