Jul 05, 2022
So, I'm gonna leave a quick review:
Frist off: I like the dark humor. I’m sure you know full well doin’ a story like this that it’s not for everyone, but I think you stroke the right notes with this.
I absolutely loved the misdirection with the “little mustache guy in hell” even thought, I already got it kinda spoiled myself by the discord TW.
The only thing I think I could warn you is that the Chaplin pedo stuff was a little too repetitive(?), maybe it would be better to try to circle around the theme without the character explicitly saying what he is.
But even thought it was a short read it was really solid! I’m on board for more!
