Jul 15, 2022

To:LionBolt

Thank you so much for checking out my story! I'm still learning and developing my writing style, but I'm happy that you like it! Also, the credit goes to Allamasllamas for making my cover art!

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Jul 14, 2022

To:Deleted User

Yes, the Lightning Gun will finally make its appearance!

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Jul 12, 2022

To:Deleted User

Yep! You could say this is their 'real' beginning.

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Jul 09, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you for reading! I'm excited to write what happens next week! And yes, LEO SHOULD RETURN

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Jul 08, 2022

To:Deleted User

I really wish that both of them can still stay.

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Jul 05, 2022

To:Deleted User

Oliver had a hard time fighting those five, so I have no idea how he could hold up if another enemy shows up.
And hey, thank you for reading!

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Jul 02, 2022

To:Deleted User

Like what they say, all good things must come to an end.
Thank you for reading!

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Jun 30, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you! I am quite excited to write the chapter that follows this. Also, I feel really bad because I haven't touched a single story in my library.

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Jun 28, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thank you for reading, Tomoyuki! I do hope as well because they deserve a better life after spending time in hell.

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Jun 25, 2022

To:Deleted User

I just added them to my library. HOPEFULLY, I can read them some time. Thank you for the recommendations!

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Jun 25, 2022

To:Deleted User

People do learn a lot when they're sometimes forced to do something. In Leo's case, he suddenly became a gun specialist lol

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Jun 25, 2022

To:Deleted User

That part has been in my head ever since I created his friend's character. I was happy that I was able to put it in the story and I'm glad that you laughed at it. Thank you!

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Jun 25, 2022

To:Deleted User

Woah, I didn't recognize it until you commented on the info dump. As I looked through my outline, I realized that there were a lot of upcoming chapters where I could integrate his family background. Thank you for pointing this out!

Also, I don't know which one is your entry for the contest but I'm guessing that all of your novels are your entries?

Anyway, thank you for checking out my story and for the feedback!

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Jun 23, 2022

Demon Zoey still best girl.

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Jun 21, 2022

To:DonOfTomorrow

Honestly, I was about to say the same thing when I saw your story but after reading your 1st chapter, I realized that we have different settings. But anyway, I enjoyed your chapter 1, will read more soon.

And thank you for the comment!

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