Aug 15, 2022
To:Xiellion
I will do my best to improve the character descriptions in my upcoming stories, thank you for pointing that out.
Ok so, first of all, thank you for checking my story, and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! I was actually excited to read your comments in every chapter and I didn't expect that you'd binge it lol
Second, I'm happy to hear that you considered the Arq Shards as a decent power system. Though not utilized by every character, I still had fun figuring out the abilities of those who used the system. Lastly, yes I failed to explain Adam's ideals further. I planned to insert some kind of backstory to him but I guess it was just me, rushing to end the story because of some irl stuff.
RIP LEO, You were a hero.
But yeah, thank you again! Will definitely read your story once I find the time. It's just in my library lol
