Apr 16, 2023
Woo, ya finally published it! This is a hell of a start. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Aug 26, 2022
Exorbitant hospital bills? I guess the story must take place in the US.
Aug 05, 2022
Lots of charming scenes in this chapter, but IMO it’s weighed down by the excessive expletives. I’m all for slamming in a cuss or ten in dialogue, but I feel “fuck” or “fucking” really loses impact after being used this much.
Aug 05, 2022
This story is a hidden gem. I’ve read up to chapter 11 or so and I thus far I love the strong characterization and world building. I especially adore how our titular main character isn’t the big fish in the pond and that we get to see this incredibly threatening world from his flawed, puny perspective. Definitely earned my follow!
Jul 23, 2022
I've always had a fondness for apocalyptic stories. Seeing how people, flawed as they are, come to terms with a seemingly inevitable end can be touching and inspiring. It was pulled off great in Frostpunk, and, so far, it's pulled off great here as well. I love the diverse characterization and the effort you put in to make this impossible scenario feel more believable. I'm quite looking forward to reading the rest of this one!
Jun 21, 2022
The scene-setting is top notch and the diction is really neat-- I had to look up "nexal" and now I'm definitely going to steal it for my next writing project. The vivid imagery does a lot to create a livable, believably unbelievable world, and I look forward to seeing what kind of shenanigans will ensue in it!