Aug 13, 2018
More from paragraph 1: "Worlds filled with various being filled the once empty universe."
I don't think this sentence makes sense. Also, you're talking about more than one again so "being" is plural. "beings". Anyway, like I said, I don't think the structure of the sentence makes sense. Maybe change it to something like "Various beings filled the world, just as various worlds filled the once empty universe.
"But none of his creation" again plural. should be "But none of his creations"
