Jul 01, 2022
To:muishiki
I started writing this as something intended to be turned into a comic/manga, that's why I have some sound effects mixed in, they were meant to be drawn. But I can't draw nor do I know any who can, so I started adding more description while leaving some of the sound effects in for a little variety. I've tried to keep it low, though, and sometimes I add the effect as well as some description and/or reaction to it. There are less of them after chapter 2 but they will still show up. Chapter 1 is the worst for it by far. Thanks for checking out my story. <3 I hope you'll keep reading as I'd love more feedback, especially for latter chapters.