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Hey there! Critical Error will be updated roughly twice a week, stay tuned! Any likes and/or comments are greatly appreciated. Any important updates about the story will be shared on @BeaverTalks, a little art account I run.
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Aug 12, 2022
To:tanktrilby
I was wondering whether the last part would read as well as I hoped it would, glad you liked it! I'll have the next part out as soon as I can.
Jul 30, 2022
To:Cosmic Voyager
Ay glad you liked it man! I was hoping this chapter's able to hook the reader, seems like it worked out to some extent!
Jul 29, 2022
Really enjoy the way you word things and how you setup the world in a few lines. Feel like the story started off at a hundred miles an hour and wasn't the easiest to follow, maybe that's just me. Excited to catch up on this!
Jul 26, 2022
To:KawaZukiYama
Hey, glad you like the novel! I'm not from the UK but I see why it might look that way, xD. And sure, I'll check your novel out tomorrow!
Jul 18, 2022
Glad you liked the premise, hopefully you'll enjoy how the story unfolds!
To:cmo67
Hey mate, appreciate the feedback! I'll def work on the dialogue/exposition for the next volumes, I kept the descriptions minimal because of the word limit and I still have a LOT to write. Hope you like the upcoming chapters!