Jul 23, 2022
This first chapter grabbed my attention immediately. I shouldn’t have expected anything less knowing you are the author, but it still took my breath away. Love Clark’s narration. He’s funny, relatable (I mean…who hasn’t tried pulling off that I-swear-I-didn’t-spend-that-long-getting-ready-look when I actually did), and I’m already drawn to him. Usually it takes me a while to get attached to a new character I’ve only just met, but I like this guy. And I’m already rooting for him to do well at his new school.
As for Sabrina…oh, I like her very much. She has that whole femme-fatale without the fatale (yet?) persona. It works very well for her.
Great first chapter.