Nov 28, 2022
Hey! Here's my newest chapter. Definitely could have edited this one before pubslishing but I was hoping that by showing the unedited version I could get some feedback and tips on my more raw writing style rather than my writing style when it is muddled in with my rewrighting. Please give me tips, opinions, observations, questions! The works. It helps. Also, I know there is definitely gonna be some plotholes and whatnot. I wasn't really looking back over my earlier chapters when I wrote this.
