Aug 05, 2022
I like the overall direction of this story and the world it's set in, but the description, imagery, and dialogue seems inconsistent. The main character also seems to lack a concrete personality, yet we've seen so much of his past open up already. I still like the premise of it and will continue reading, but it feels as though these chapters were written in a rushed manner. I hope the future chapters are more consistent and refined as well as the horror scenes are describes in more detail in order to set in a full sense of fear to the reader.