I'm a 18 year old boy trying to write decent readable short form novels. Any criticism is great, as it will make my writing even better if I get more comments. Hope everyone, that deserves it is having a nice day inshallah. *:･ﾟ✧*:･ﾟ Things about me: Asian (Chinese), Libra (Oct 15.) Current Writing Project: That One Fan (Treating everyone with some love with a 👍) I do watch anime, but I mostly read manga now as I'm much more busy than when I was young. *:･ﾟ✧*:･ﾟ Socials ↓ Discord - れん#4909 Anilist - https://anilist.co/user/RenZed/ Last.fm - https://www.last.fm/user/RenZeded