Oct 10, 2023
I loved this! I think you described the state of apathy extremely well! The repetition of "eh, sure, whatever" really helped with that too.It was a nice touch and it felt really poetic in a way. ❤️
Also, don't forget to mark your novel as "completed", because right now your status is "ongoing".
And yes, I was trying to not make it look too tragic, haha. I will check out your entry right now! Best of luck to you also! ❤️ 
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