Jun 08, 2023
Hi there. First of all, thanks for reading the latest chapters of my novel.
This is really well written. I really liked how you set up the setting of the mysterious island in the first few paragraphs. The description of the buildings is quite detailed and clear, and you set the mysterious tone really well. This may just be my English literature mind working, but I kinda like how you donât provide us with much information about the main character; it emphasises his amnesia, and it acts as a nice way for both the character and the reader to find out more about him along the line. I do wonder how the romance will be included in it, but I'm still intrigued by the overall plot.
Keep up the great work. Iâll be sure to read the rest of the chapters when I have some free time.
