Nov 05, 2023
This is nice, clear, and linear. I wonder what could've happened if the protagonist did more than just hang out with her? Poor lady was unhappy. Maybe giving her thousands of coins would've made her happier? Initially I thought that the protagonist gave up on life a bit too easily, but it seems since the woman was the highlight of his day, his work must've not been so great. The man acted to rashly in a bit of a nonsensical way, but that's the charm of the story as well. It's true to itself. Good job!
