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I had a dream so lit I decided to write it into a chaotic story (WTRS). Feedback will always be welcomed!
Nov 09, 2024
To:Bubbles
Hi Bubbles! I never expected to wake up and see you checking out my story but this was a nice surprise!! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to read it!
My intention with this opening was to show that this will be mostly an action-packed story and start displaying Radio's character at face value first and trickling more and more as chapters go by. His stakes and internal goals are something a bit difficult to express right off the bat, but I'll be sure to tweak this chapter and see what I can add to it
Nov 08, 2024
To:kazesenken
Hi Kaze!! Thanks for checking out my novel!! Thats a good theory for a first chapter lol. I cant say anything about it yet but there is definitely some distance between them
To:Kitsune
Radio just doesnt think before he shoots. RIP to all faceless guards. 😔
Hakase being Kaori’s emotional support is just relationship goals man 😭😭 I need a Hakase in my life too kairhhfsk Girls giving her all for paperwork in a week more than i did for my entirety of college and I admire that dedication 🤝 Im she’ll get to shine soon and ill be cheering for her on 😌
Nov 07, 2024
PS im seeing more Theo coded antics i approve 😌
Ooooh so a guy named Malik had a hand in this… a schemer in the shadows? 👀 Im probably jumping too fast im just that excited askdhhsak
But hmmm, Jessie knows more about his dad more than others, and he claims he’s not reckless. The dad does sound like a responsible guy that knows the dangers and is cautious, so… what if its not an accident? 👀 Or maybe im just theorizing too quickly kahehbshf
Sergeant Nishi: >shows up >gives orders >refuses to elaborate >hangs up 💀👍 Also, a mission about fighting not irl but IN GAME? Nahhh its an actual mission that i can do LMAO sign me up i main supports/rangers and healers 😭👍
“Does your dog bite?” “No. Worse. He judges and blackmails you” 😭😭 I love Shiba but DAMN trolling his master he’s never gonna be a good boy isnt he 😭
Also, Hideo with cig scars? That doesnt sound good 🤔
YOOOO An apocalyptic survival story?? Hell yeah sign me up 😤 Vanessa is so cool fighting and struggling and im happy to see another badass protagonist going crazy on the first chapter 🔥 Im super excited to see how your version of alt history goes!!
Nov 06, 2024
To:Katsuhito
Asrjfskgfkg this is the fastest time anyone read my book right after posting it in A YEAR 😭😭 THANK YOU YOURE A REAL ONE 😭😭
Also yessirr Radio decides to go wild again 💀 And you’re right on track on my plans on developing him too! We’re barely 4 chapters in after all 😉
Nov 05, 2024
One would expect cute dogs like Shiba would behave like a good boy but nah lil guys got sass 💀💀💀 At least he’s down to help even with the morally questionable tasks
Jessie almost royally screwing up the stealth is just too amusing 😭 But DAMN he makes it up by being OP as hell too and him SMASHING device asfhfhs nah i love seeing alt history protags doing whatever tf they want 🤝 But Talia’s words tho DAMN I FELT THAT TOO THATS FOUL 😭😭😭
To:Akahana
Gotta make it clear that he’s not part of the good guy squad… but who knows if his thought process will stay the same in the future 👀
Nov 04, 2024
klsjdkljlka ok note to self never read while half asleep LMAO i was reading this right when i woke up and checked hf 😭😭 sorry for not realizing it 😭😭
Damn should’ve known getting along with him aint gonna be easy, just gonna hope things wont escalate even further
“How about we get you a robot do—“ Yes. Yes. YES NO NEED TO SAY MORE 🐕🐕 And its a shiba inu? A BIG SHIBA INU? THATS A W IN MY BOOKS