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Lucid Levia

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I had a dream so lit I decided to write it into a chaotic story (WTRS). Feedback will always be welcomed!

registered at: Jun 12, 2023

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Nov 09, 2024

To:Shulox

HE DID THE AMONGUSS😭😭 the officer is snacking on chips at the worst place and time too 😭

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:3

Nov 09, 2024

To:Bubbles

Thanks for the feedback. I'd love to argue that Radio was indeed "there" with the group by watching it over his spy cam but writing third person while differentiating from Radio's pov is something I admit is challenging lol

I'd rather avoid changing the transition symbols because I was actually planning to change it later as a detail to show Radio's change in perspective of himself as the story goes on, but something like changing symbols entirely for 3rd person is something I can do. Thanks again for pointing it out!

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:3

Nov 09, 2024

To:Bubbles

Hi Bubbles! I never expected to wake up and see you checking out my story but this was a nice surprise!! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to read it!

My intention with this opening was to show that this will be mostly an action-packed story and start displaying Radio's character at face value first and trickling more and more as chapters go by. His stakes and internal goals are something a bit difficult to express right off the bat, but I'll be sure to tweak this chapter and see what I can add to it

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:1

Nov 08, 2024

To:kazesenken

Hi Kaze!! Thanks for checking out my novel!!
Thats a good theory for a first chapter lol. I cant say anything about it yet but there is definitely some distance between them

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:1

Nov 08, 2024

To:Kitsune

Radio just doesnt think before he shoots. RIP to all faceless guards. 😔

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:4

Nov 08, 2024

Hakase being Kaori’s emotional support is just relationship goals man 😭😭 I need a Hakase in my life too kairhhfsk Girls giving her all for paperwork in a week more than i did for my entirety of college and I admire that dedication 🤝 Im she’ll get to shine soon and ill be cheering for her on 😌

Anima: Don't Take the Bait

Chapter:3

Nov 07, 2024

PS im seeing more Theo coded antics i approve 😌

Chrono Knight

Chapter:6

Nov 07, 2024

Ooooh so a guy named Malik had a hand in this… a schemer in the shadows? 👀 Im probably jumping too fast im just that excited askdhhsak

But hmmm, Jessie knows more about his dad more than others, and he claims he’s not reckless. The dad does sound like a responsible guy that knows the dangers and is cautious, so… what if its not an accident? 👀 Or maybe im just theorizing too quickly kahehbshf

Chrono Knight

Chapter:6

Nov 07, 2024

Sergeant Nishi:
>shows up
>gives orders
>refuses to elaborate
>hangs up
💀👍
Also, a mission about fighting not irl but IN GAME? Nahhh its an actual mission that i can do LMAO sign me up i main supports/rangers and healers 😭👍

Drifting on Blue Tides

Chapter:6

Nov 07, 2024

“Does your dog bite?”
“No. Worse. He judges and blackmails you” 😭😭 I love Shiba but DAMN trolling his master he’s never gonna be a good boy isnt he 😭

Also, Hideo with cig scars? That doesnt sound good 🤔

Drifting on Blue Tides

Chapter:5

Nov 07, 2024

YOOOO An apocalyptic survival story?? Hell yeah sign me up 😤 Vanessa is so cool fighting and struggling and im happy to see another badass protagonist going crazy on the first chapter 🔥 Im super excited to see how your version of alt history goes!!

Apocalypse Punk

Chapter:1

Nov 06, 2024

To:Katsuhito

Asrjfskgfkg this is the fastest time anyone read my book right after posting it in A YEAR 😭😭 THANK YOU YOURE A REAL ONE 😭😭

Also yessirr Radio decides to go wild again 💀 And you’re right on track on my plans on developing him too! We’re barely 4 chapters in after all 😉

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:4

Nov 05, 2024

One would expect cute dogs like Shiba would behave like a good boy but nah lil guys got sass 💀💀💀 At least he’s down to help even with the morally questionable tasks

Drifting on Blue Tides

Chapter:4

Nov 05, 2024

Jessie almost royally screwing up the stealth is just too amusing 😭 But DAMN he makes it up by being OP as hell too and him SMASHING device asfhfhs nah i love seeing alt history protags doing whatever tf they want 🤝 But Talia’s words tho DAMN I FELT THAT TOO THATS FOUL 😭😭😭

Chrono Knight

Chapter:5

Nov 05, 2024

To:Akahana

Gotta make it clear that he’s not part of the good guy squad… but who knows if his thought process will stay the same in the future 👀

Phantom Frequency

Chapter:2

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