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I had a dream so lit I decided to write it into a chaotic story (WTRS). Feedback will always be welcomed!
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Apr 20, 2024
Wow, Reo changed! We're getting somewhere! GG for the Hinami Pirates!! And good job Reo for working with the team!! But wow... cant believe we're already more than halfway done and also cant believe the contest is around the corner too. I'm honestly excited for it 👍
Apr 18, 2024
jesus this is just pure chaos
i love it
Apr 17, 2024
i read this out of curiosity and im actually liking this
Apr 12, 2024
Even now, Reo still hasn't learned to pass, huh? Maybe after their loss, it somehow convinced him that the team might not be good enough... alongside his egoist side 😭 But it seems like he's starting to grow aware of himself even if its just a little. He for sure doesn't want to lose, but maybe winning for someone's sake is a stronger reason. I believe in his potential growth 😤
Apr 05, 2024
"she regarded him as a peculiar edgelord" frfr 😭 I'm liking this slow burn though! Aside from the heated competitiveness, I really do like how Reo is gradually bonding with his team and Shuna. Here's to hoping that they can change him for the better 😤👍 Also, a history book? The Hinami Pirates have that much of a history?? 👀 Color me intrigued
Mar 29, 2024
Maybe Reo's accident years ago made him feel less defeated than the others. Maybe its bc he already knows the feeling of hopelessness and he got used to it 😭 Also that talk with Gonda and his mom... I hope they help Reo realize football isn't all just competition 🤔 Idm any visuals so its up to you!
Mar 22, 2024
Yikes, I don't think the Pirates will forget their defeat. Negative memories do hurt and stay longer in our memories like a scar than good memories imo 🤔 But this is just one game!! Learn from those failures and don't give up!! (Also this loss could also help Reo balance his narcissistic side and be more humble. Maybe it could even help him forget the stress of competitiveness and enjoy football casually?) Also idm either character for the next visual!! Either works 👍
Mar 15, 2024
Aaand the game begins! ...in a rough spot 😭👍 Looks like the Pirates are facing a more challenging team than the previous, so perhaps this might push Reo to be in his 100% serious gamer mode? I'm pretty sure his narcissistic side will make sure his team wins 👀 And wow Haneda looks great! And yeah! I think it'll be pre awesome to see everyone together like a group pic style!
Mar 12, 2024
It really was a fun read, and I'm glad this chapter wraps up the remaining questions left! You all did amazing!!
Mar 11, 2024
To:Kirb
Lmao I didn't catch that but I did mentally call out Jesus Christ while reading Isaac's brutal death
Nicely wrapped ending! For a short mystery story, I find it super enjoyable to read
Mar 10, 2024
Toto nooo not the motion sickness 😭 Did I half-jinxed it chapters ago? 💀 I love how the boys got into a random fight in a retail store too. The poor clerk has to clean up their messes now 😭 (And I can totally relate to Reo... having some drama does spice things up heheh) And Kaoru surprisingly looks cooler than I expected! Nice!! I'm gonna agree with Yoru and say that I'd like a little surprise too 👍
Mar 09, 2024
must be terrible dying from a scroll 😭
Mar 08, 2024
Also Gonda's hair is a little shorter than I imagined 😯 Other than that, he looks pretty accurate to what I imagined! 👍
Rest in peace to the legend, Toriyama. DBZ was part of my earliest memories of childhood that I'll never forget 🙏
Onto the chapter though, that was a nice little history lesson! And I'm also liking how Reo is showing signs of interest in football again! We making progress 👀
GG for the Hinami Pirates!! And good job Reo for working with the team!! But wow... cant believe we're already more than halfway done and also cant believe the contest is around the corner too. I'm honestly excited for it 👍
