Nov 07, 2023
To:minatika
wow thank you 😭 I'm super glad to hear that >< there was a time (possibly as I split the tennis arc into a third chapter--) where I wondered if anybody in their right mind would finish this lmao luckily at least a couple things went well!
right?? yeah, just because two people fall in love in almost every story out there doesn't mean a real romance is easy to write! you're too kind, personally I was thinking I may have rushed it, surely 30k isn't enough time for a true romance to bloom? (outing myself as a slow burn enthusiast...) Natural romantic dialogue is really hard, especially when you try to bake it intentionally, but if it helps, I think your dialogue flows well so far! excited to get back into reading once the holidays roll around...
