Dec 30, 2024
Hello everyone, this is probably one of the last real entries to the competition. I will be treating each comment section to give me ‘Author Annotations’. So first, expect a 2 chapter per day sechdule as I attempt to outline (the final 10 chapters), write, edit, and proofread about 4k words perday for 2 weeks. Pray for me because I am going to need it.
As for this chapter itself, I added a tiny foreshadowing to show that Ved had fallen on his head with the line “For some reason he could feel his head was aching from the side but that slowly disappeared” and then showing it in “Ved absently nodded and felt pain the side of his head noting that he must have fell on it”.
I hope that looks clever, lol. Anyways I have exams on the 15th and a 30-40k story to write. LETS GO!
