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Hello! I am Nia Kenji a sis-con novelist who is super passionate to bring you the best content I possibly can! Thank you to all my readers and I can't wait for you to see all the cool stuff I have in store for you guys!
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Nov 23, 2025
I read it and it’s honestly pretty good. You have some issues in the feeling of prose and you need to dawdle in description more cause you use one word to describe things that would be interesting to be expanded on. Also your style is rather verbose and it feels like you always feel the need to say straight up what you mean rather than letting people infer from your description. It’s good but it’s obvious your new. Good work and keep doing your best at it!
Aug 19, 2023
To:Gen/Esis
I’ll keep that in mind thanks for the feedback!