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Young Writer with a dream of turning my story into an anime.
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Jan 25, 2025
Strong start. You're good at describing scenery, and your dialogue for characters like Livy is good. The ending could be better and maybe explain more about the world. Who is the queen of time? Who are spell casters? The invasion feels sudden, and you could build up some tension besides that nice work.
Jan 12, 2025
congrats on finally completing ur novel! 🙌👏
Jan 03, 2025
this is actually decent. how did chrono energy come to be where did it come from?
nice chapter I like the flow and pacing and the chrono energy how did it come to be?
nice chapter and loving the cover!
Jan 02, 2025
Wow, that was something... the way you described the zombie attack I felt it i was there. so many scenes and so many questions I can't wait to read the next chapters nice work.
nice ending well done on completing the story. you truly made an engaging narrative
Dec 09, 2024
like the choice of the empire in space. It’s unique and I love it
Dec 05, 2024
👍
Dec 02, 2024
bro your writing style is so good!
Good chapter. I like how Rafar shares his past slightly. I wonder where they will take her...
Nov 27, 2024
Nice start. The introduction of the mechas and mutants was well done and I could feel I was in the warzone.
Nice opening
Nov 13, 2024
I feel like the director definitely is going to be an antagonist in the near future
Nov 03, 2024
nice story. I like the way it flows so far and has a great beginning. It’s a fascinating story and I’m looking forward to what you have in store next good job!
