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Young Writer with a dream of turning my story into an anime.
What is an Achievement?
Dec 02, 2024
Good chapter. I like how Rafar shares his past slightly. I wonder where they will take her...
To:Juxny
their inventions only work when they interact with them physically
Nov 27, 2024
Nice start. The introduction of the mechas and mutants was well done and I could feel I was in the warzone.
Nice opening
Nov 13, 2024
I feel like the director definitely is going to be an antagonist in the near future
Nov 03, 2024
nice story. I like the way it flows so far and has a great beginning. It’s a fascinating story and I’m looking forward to what you have in store next good job!
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Oct 31, 2024
Hi. you have a good opening. One suggestion is that you could arrange your chapter into structured paragraphs so you're audience can read the story more easily. You could also add some grammar tweaking but besides that love your story. Good job!
Love this story. The plot of the digital afterlife is a unique twist. Excited to see what you have in store next!
Oct 30, 2024
Hi guys. This is the end of the first arc of lumina. After this chapter is the next arc where Renjiro and the group will face new challenges
you'll find out 😁
nice story i enjoyed the first chapter good work!
Oct 29, 2024
icl i enjoyed this. good pacing
nice chapter!
Oct 20, 2024
Nice opening. From one new author to another, your story has potential can't wait to see what you have in store next!
