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Young Writer with a dream of turning my story into an anime.
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Nov 03, 2024
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Oct 31, 2024
Hi. you have a good opening. One suggestion is that you could arrange your chapter into structured paragraphs so you're audience can read the story more easily. You could also add some grammar tweaking but besides that love your story. Good job!
Love this story. The plot of the digital afterlife is a unique twist. Excited to see what you have in store next!
Oct 30, 2024
nice story i enjoyed the first chapter good work!
Oct 29, 2024
icl i enjoyed this. good pacing
nice chapter!
Oct 20, 2024
Nice opening. From one new author to another, your story has potential can't wait to see what you have in store next!