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Aether

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Young Writer with a dream of turning my story into an anime.

registered at: Oct 09, 2024

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Jan 25, 2025

Strong start. You're good at describing scenery, and your dialogue for characters like Livy is good. The ending could be better and maybe explain more about the world. Who is the queen of time? Who are spell casters? The invasion feels sudden, and you could build up some tension besides that nice work.

The Holessian Sea

Chapter:1

Jan 12, 2025

congrats on finally completing ur novel! 🙌👏

Chrono Knight

Chapter:50

Jan 03, 2025

this is actually decent. how did chrono energy come to be where did it come from?

Chrono Knight

Chapter:0

Jan 03, 2025

nice chapter I like the flow and pacing and the chrono energy how did it come to be?

Chrono Knight

Chapter:0

Jan 03, 2025

nice chapter and loving the cover!

Memoria

Chapter:27

Jan 02, 2025

Wow, that was something... the way you described the zombie attack I felt it i was there. so many scenes and so many questions I can't wait to read the next chapters nice work.

Origins of Blood

Chapter:1

Jan 02, 2025

nice ending well done on completing the story. you truly made an engaging narrative

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:30

Dec 09, 2024

like the choice of the empire in space. It’s unique and I love it

Eversor Praetorian

Chapter:0

Dec 05, 2024

👍

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:14

Dec 02, 2024

bro
your writing style is so good!

Beyond the Sky

Chapter:1

Dec 02, 2024

Good chapter. I like how Rafar shares his past slightly. I wonder where they will take her...

I was reborn in a futuristic robotic world - Season 1+

Chapter:22

Nov 27, 2024

Nice start. The introduction of the mechas and mutants was well done and I could feel I was in the warzone.

Fall of Iron

Chapter:1

Nov 13, 2024

I feel like the director definitely is going to be an antagonist in the near future

Memoria

Chapter:8

Nov 03, 2024

nice story. I like the way it flows so far and has a great beginning. It’s a fascinating story and I’m looking forward to what you have in store next good job!

Drifting on Blue Tides

Chapter:1

Nov 03, 2024

👍

I was reborn in a futuristic robotic world - Season 1+

Chapter:8

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