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Furies

Hi, I’m Furies. I’m a novice author working on a light novel called Reverse Rain. This is my first novel, and it also my first attempt at writing in English. I appreciate your support as you following and join me on this journey. Thank you. 👏

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registered at: Oct 16, 2024

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Dec 06, 2024

This episode, again. I stood up and applauding. 👏👏👏👏

Wow when both on the stage the dance is so beautiful. I'm smiled when this line showed up, 'At one point, the two reached for each other, their hands almost touched, second they pulled back.' 💃💃 Woooow! the so good.

Also, towards the conclusion of this chapter, you build up the tense well.
I know it will bring to the next drop point. but it kinda sad...

Hotwired!

Chapter:16

Dec 03, 2024

🌧🌧 Character Aria - Encounter Scene. 🌧🌧
https://i.imgur.com/4qmsVjR.jpeg
Hope you like it. 🦝✨🦝

Reverse of the Rain

Chapter:1

Dec 02, 2024

Hi Everyone, bad news, I’m putting writing on hold for a week. 🐟

I’m re-editing the first couple of chapters. 📝📝📝 Thanks to the Review. your sentiment is so kind to me. I will keep practicing.

Hope you understand, I’ll be back soon! ✨

https://i.imgur.com/2lyTlJW.jpeg

Reverse of the Rain

Chapter:56

Nov 28, 2024

Wow... the concept behind the veil is *beep* *beep* *beep* great. 🌟 🌟 I like the storytelling. I also love this this guy, the Caden boy 🤖 so much. His humor is so good make me smile a lot.

☕ Hahh, with a good blended coffee, purrrfect.🐱✨

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Chapter:14

Nov 27, 2024

To:obliviousbushtit

💐 Thank you for your kindness. I understand now. The picture is much clearer. 💐

It’s like the sound is already in your head, commonly understood. Wow, this level is quite challenging for me. In my home (3 - w-)3, we only speak these four English words, yes, no, ok, and thank you🙏... Just kidding, we actually use more than that... But that feeling of connection is special, especially for someone who has been living with the language for a long time. That knew the unique of linking word.

Thank you so much. I truly appreciate you sharing your knowledge. ✨

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Chapter:12

Nov 27, 2024

🏌️‍♂️Phew~ Finally finish this long chapter :3

🔮 Piece of Secret revealed. 🔮

Write something with, technology smarty words are so hard. Rewrite again and again, like in the unlimited loop. 😿 Mr. Grammarly scold me again and again. Always sent the red worm beneath my texts. 🟥🐛🟥🐛

Sorry Mr. Grammarly I don't know the word you correcting me at all. 🙏🙏

Reverse of the Rain

Chapter:51

Nov 27, 2024

🙋‍♂️ May I ask 🙋‍♂️ some technical term of the Em-dash —
I saw your works have it, also with the other writer works. ✍ like its do connect with two words, but something piqued me. What is that mean ❓
(like as Either---it'd) (Acceptable---it's powerful) (Together---the old) like as these of words in you sentence.

I Try finding in reference book 📚 But still don't understand of the use. What feeling of this type of Em-dash. And how you read or sense of reading it.❓

I only know how to use dash (-) to connect the word that have to connect if separate the meaning will veer and misunderstood. 💁‍♀️ But this one I'm really in the cloud 🌦 💁‍♀️.

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Chapter:12

Nov 26, 2024

To:obliviousbushtit

“ I will plan for revenge later, Wah ha ha ha, ha ha … cough, cough. Aria, I didn’t said anything “ Rain said. He then turned his head, covered his mouth and gossiped ( I will let her dress cat-beastkin for Christmas.🐈🎄)

Reverse of the Rain

Chapter:50

Nov 26, 2024

ba-dum, ba-dum 💗 center… are choosing, all girls catching their dream, sweat and tear are blended.

Nice! Nice! 🔦💡🌈 full swing with light stick. 🔦💡🌈 Nice! Nice!

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Chapter:13

Nov 25, 2024

⬛ One Cloak man leaned his back on metal door, Clang, Clang. He knocked metal sheet twice.🌟🌟

Cleek! Eye-peeking block slid. "What wrong?"

Cloak man not speak, he send paper-note 📄 on the channel.

Confused, "What this?" but the door man took the letter inside, and read it.

Thud! His knees fall, hand closed his mouth. tear welled up. on the note have message. 'Flower bloom💐, River shorn🤽‍♀️, Romance came🎴'. He then said with trembled voice "R-really?"

Cloak man nodded, crystal tear falling. "Yes, mate, our waiting episode come..." 🌄

"...Thank god." 🙏

Real comment : Thank you for the chapter, This easy and joyful reading episode, love the conversation they have. | Swirled the spoon in the digital coffee, ☕ soo good.

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Chapter:12

Nov 22, 2024

Elliot, what are you doing, this is your best friend house.🏠 Cham's house. at least, could you find her a knife in kitchen.🔪 or golf club 🏌️‍♂️ not wooden stick 🍢 How black-heart you are? leave her alone like that, I know she will burden but at least give a tried...

I read further...

Good boy Elliot, you left her at that house. 🏠 Thank god. 🙏

🐛🐛🐛 !?!?@#$#! Gore censored !?!?@#$#! 🐛🐛🐛

Real comment : Noice! Epgisoze!.

Origins of Blood

Chapter:2

Nov 22, 2024

🐛 Chomp! Wow his blood so sweet, 🐛 Chomp! 🐛 Chomp! Yum, Yum, that really sweet. "He,he,He,he... give me you beautiful face, Elliot and open the 'zombie track' for me" Worm said. 🎶🐛🎶 In youurr head... zombie... zombie..

Real comment : Wish that he not changing to zombie lord... or worm lord? or worm-man? 🤔 I'm kidding, This chapter is so fun with much promising next episode. ✨

Origins of Blood

Chapter:1

Nov 22, 2024

To:obliviousbushtit

I quickly ran at front, Head turned towards sky. There, a golden light sphere falling. I bended knee and dashed out. My hands starched out far. 🙌
*Guru, guru, guru,* my body rolled on the floor. Wait a moment, I stood up, then rising my hand on top of the sky. It shorn bright entire area. Then I inhaled the air and shouted out with all my lungs. “COMMENT SAVEEEEE!” 🌟

🙏 Thank you so much, because of your work, I’m really learning a lot. Please don’t angry and hate at me… if sometime the structure of my sentence was likely. (🔮 may you already notice that I am favorable a lot from your words and clause. 🔮)

Thank you for giving me a guidance, your comment and like were incredibly helpful. 🌟

Reverse of the Rain

Chapter:46

Nov 20, 2024

Last Episode you give us a cat. 😼 This episode you give us a robot 🤖 Beep bop! Beoop, Boop!

You’re so smart, make him work hard, show us a story and backbone with all dialogue! (Is Lena going to double his salary 💲💲 or get him a fancy battery? 🔋)

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Chapter:11

Nov 20, 2024

🙀 Sorry for the comment on first chapter, Your fast pace and action sequence are shine bright here. the characteristic, the moment, the thought are here, in these action. 🙀 🔪

💥 This chapter is very good. 📔

Yumix, Unveiled

Chapter:4