Ashley / Comments

Ashley

71 Following

121 Followers

I write stuff

registered at: Oct 22, 2024

Roles

Author

Badge

gold

What is Badge?

Achievement

What is an Achievement?

Report this user

Novels

Gallery

Comments

Reviews

aaa

Aug 20, 2025

To:TheGreatZombini

Yes… join his crew…

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:1

Aug 19, 2025

seems fine, dunno what feedback I can offer tbh. Seems like you have a style, seems competently written. Good job 👍

Necrolepsy

Chapter:1

Aug 19, 2025

To:Slow

Sorry, I got lost in my thoughts of Daddy Reinhart <3

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:21

Aug 19, 2025

To:Mara

She’s a dwarf… I’m sure it’s fine. Also Lark isn’t old enough to drink

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:22

Aug 19, 2025

To:Slow

I’m glad. I always like writing a scene and then saying. “but what if I didn’t do it that way”

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:22

Aug 19, 2025

I would also move the author note down to here rather than the chapter itself.

Reborn Nephilim : I alone am the End of Existence

Chapter:0

Aug 19, 2025

Please check the formatting and punctuation. It is really difficult to read.

Reborn Nephilim : I alone am the End of Existence

Chapter:1

Aug 19, 2025

To:TheWriteKC

literally he just saw the rusty blade and was like 'this hurts my dwarf eyes'

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:11

Aug 18, 2025

To:Slow

the power of ‘gun’ reigns supreme

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:21

Aug 18, 2025

Come again another day… sorry it’s like a conditioned response seeing your title

An Original Sin

Chapter:5

Aug 18, 2025

Sit in the god damn robot Nell… I mean sit on the god damn throne shinji! wait? 🤔

An Original Sin

Chapter:4

Aug 17, 2025

To:haru

Viola in my notes is 'Ara Ara Harpy'

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:20

Aug 17, 2025

To:haru

"Haru... join my crew" (lark whispers into Haru's ear)

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:18

Aug 17, 2025

To:haru

Need to make a character called Haru to be part of his harem then :)

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:17

Aug 17, 2025

To:Moon

She slays… literally

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:16