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Mar 08, 2025

To:Slow

awesome, then no issue

Black & White: Spirits, Love, and Traditions

Chapter:2

Mar 08, 2025

my only note, and it may be just a me thing but I don’t think you need as much exposition about the tattoo and Japanese culture. You could probably get away without that. but like it’s not a big thing so if you want to keep it that’s cool too 😊 I’m not a picky reader. really enjoying it.

Black & White: Spirits, Love, and Traditions

Chapter:2

Mar 08, 2025

my headcanon is that this is going to spiral into Evangelion but about getting in the god damn bathtub. The father issues are already there

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:3

Mar 08, 2025

The Kaiju’s ex wife made me laugh. I look forward to seeing this new Kaiju.

I Prolonged the World’s Demise by Babysitting a Kaiju

Chapter:3

Mar 04, 2025

fwegyusfghsjkdhfhgdsgfjkh. This was worth the wait

Parallel in Two

Chapter:35

Mar 01, 2025

This is the good stuff.

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:16

Mar 01, 2025

I love the humour. I also love Little Shit, both as a menace and as a tiny adorable creature that needs protecting. Good job

I Prolonged the World’s Demise by Babysitting a Kaiju

Chapter:2

Mar 01, 2025

I love the way you write. I can’t wait to see this romance unfold. Sakura seems to have a lot going on, but also cool and interesting and Jumo also sounds like a delightful character. I want more!!!!

Black & White: Spirits, Love, and Traditions

Chapter:1

Feb 27, 2025

See Kaiju click, I’m very interested in seeing where this goes

I Prolonged the World’s Demise by Babysitting a Kaiju

Chapter:1

Feb 27, 2025

To:Noa Mora

I know you have a song of the day, but with that end scene I can’t help but think careless whispers

Bloodlust

Chapter:6

Feb 27, 2025

I’ve got the blood clip from Road to El Dorado stuck in my head now:

“both”
“both”
“both”
“both is good”

Bloodlust

Chapter:5

Feb 27, 2025

headcanon “Aurora Rain” is just censored vomit from the sky

End of Service was Announced, So I'm Retiring as the Last Boss to Become a Bard!

Chapter:6

Feb 25, 2025

legion best girl confirmed

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:13

Feb 19, 2025

there are web series on this site and then there is art. This is art <3

This is the Book

Chapter:1

Feb 19, 2025

To:Bubbles

It’s more to do with ‘I don’t even crack it during that day’ the phrasing is odd and not very common outside the UK (in that particular format). Given the dialogue reads UK and the rest reads elsewhere I found it odd. I think it may also be the present tense choice, crack open a window and ‘crack it’ are similar but different in their common usage.

Also I’m nitpicking this because I like everything else about the story.

Also, if you are satisfied with it then that’s also totally cool 😊it’s a great story.

Cat Got My Tongue

Chapter:1

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