Nov 09, 2024
The revision is really good and a lot more detailed! I think you conveyed Sora as a mysterious character really well, I feel the same as the rest of the characters when it comes to her.
I’m super interested in the other Sora in “Fragments of memory”. I wonder where that chapter places chronologically actually, it makes me wonder if this is a time loop lol.
Anyways I’m really interested in seeing how you go about the visual novel if this were to be about two different time lines? I’ll be waiting excitedly for more chapters.
