Sep 06, 2025

selene at the end is taking me out. ALSO THE FUCKING "THEY DIDN'T RESPAWN CUZ IT WAS THE PROLOGUE" I'M CRYING SO BAD i missed your subvertive writing sooo bad. and yay for 4th wall concepts exploring different types of personhood!!! also this is making me wonder do you read a lot of those like deconstructed isekai manhwas because this reminds me of that a lot

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Sep 06, 2025

To:lolitroy

HI!!! dude don't say that i've seen your writing improve in realtime and this is one of many examples of it. cannot wait to see more >:3 your writing is only gonna get better!!!

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Aug 27, 2025

i meant to comment on this forever ago back when i read it but i somehow forgot to unless i'm wrong and i didn't in which case i guess you're getting a second comment that mostly says the same stuff and who doesn't want that. But anyway i missed your writing sooo much and this is such a good example of why it's so good. i love how funny and insane this is while also tackling really heavy shit. most unserious concept ever about very serious topics. and the way you manage to allude to soo much info about both characters in just the letter?!?! mc being a #loner (and the more obvious creepy behavior) vs senpai being this like popular anti-loner or whatever who suffers from parental neglect and mad repression. the way there's actually so much characterization for the person that doesn't SHOW UP OR SAY ANYTHING in this and is just written about by the narrator in 1 letter and so much of it isn't super explicit. bwuh. i will catch up on/read more of your storys soon i just wanted to look at this one first cuz it looked funny (and it was) (but it was also peak)

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