obliviousbushtit / Comments | Honeyfeed

obliviousbushtit

ART by the AMAZING furies. Please check out Reverse of the Rain. carthonladler74

registered at: Nov 16, 2024

Roles

Author

Badge

silver

Achievements

What is an Achievement?

Report this user

Novels

Gallery

Comments

Reviews

aaa

Sep 10, 2025

Very engaging first four chapters! Forgot to like the first 3 lol

The cover of the 1st volume of The Heracle's Diary

The Heracle's Diary - My Story in Another World

Chapter:3

Sep 09, 2025

Punching usually solves people's problems though....

RE:Prophecy Cover

RE:Prophecy

Chapter:12

Sep 09, 2025

Height of consent is crazy

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:8

Sep 09, 2025

It is an OK introduction, but ask yourself what separates your story apart from Shield Hero? What is the unique draw to your story? Your MC is similarly OK, but I can't seem to stand him apart from other MCs from other novels.

Right now, your blurb is too general to stand out from other summon and betrayal novels. Once you have the unique concept, then stick with the general premise of summon and betrayal.

Home cover

Betrayed by my group, I walk alone in the shadows of the other world

Chapter:1

Sep 09, 2025

BE CAREFUL MIKKAH!!!

RE:Prophecy Cover

RE:Prophecy

Chapter:11

Sep 09, 2025

Peak premise we will be reading

An Ausmulian Goblin wielding a short Falcata

Koninzak

Chapter:0

Sep 09, 2025

WE WILL BE READING

Beyond the Trench (Temporary)

Beyond the Trench

Chapter:1

Sep 07, 2025

I like how endlessly witty your novel is

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:7

Sep 07, 2025

To:TheLeanna_M

It strikes a good balance I think, don't worry too much about it

The Last Revision

The Last Revision

Chapter:3

Sep 07, 2025

To:Moon

Good feedback! Will edit

AcumenFINAL

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:11

Sep 07, 2025

Such a professional prose you got

The Last Revision

The Last Revision

Chapter:1

Sep 06, 2025

I LOVE how vivid the world is in your story wow. I echo Mara's concerns as well

Cover

Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:18

Sep 06, 2025

To:Mara

Good things hopefully...

Cover

Kingdoms of Sin: The Hero Is Dead

Chapter:17

Sep 06, 2025

To:Armorien

WE ENTERING PHASE 2 NOW!! Just easing the reader into accepting new lore in a way that's not overwhelming was my angle here

AcumenFINAL

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:26

Sep 06, 2025

To:haru

Just the title reminded me of it

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You Cover

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:4