Dec 04, 2024
...pretty solid material, thus far brudda.
IMO, a little muddy in spots, as far as where the reader's direction goes. But overall; the characters, the circumstances, dramatic writing style in general...
it all definitely had some mundo grab and panache. I'm also looking forward to seeing more of your beautiful artwork, that'll accompany the rest of the LN.
Good job Yatagarasu, I will keep reading!
