Feb 15, 2025
Interesting start to the story, good amount of tension to start building things up. I'm keen to know more on how the nexus works as a world and if there's more in the universe. So far most interesting character is Madigan, with Olga I'm currently rereading over to catch a better bead on her, but I'll leave that for future chapters. Only thing to recommend now is to punch up the dialogue on another pass to give it some more natural flow.