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Barbados Nascar

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Hello everyone. I love reading and writing novels, novellas, mangas, comic book. Anything with a great story

registered at: Feb 06, 2025

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Aug 05, 2025

This was a ride! What a story man, you manage to weave in these storylines, some high moments and soft slice of life moments, it just blows my mind. However, i have noticed a small inconsistencies, for example Michael's brother, you mentioned him last in the meeting i think and we never see or hear him again. But other than that, this was really good.

THE BELLRINGER MAIDEN

Chapter:21

Aug 05, 2025

I love how you fit these chapters together, like an even t that happened a few chapters ago, just interconnects with this one. and the way they just deal with it deepens the impacts of the Suits and the destruction. well done

THE BELLRINGER MAIDEN

Chapter:17

Aug 05, 2025

I loved the chapter title and the chapter was also great

THE BELLRINGER MAIDEN

Chapter:14

Jul 18, 2025

okay, okay So this is what you've been working. interesting start

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:1

Jul 18, 2025

To:theACE

glad you enjoyed it.
Im still debating but i have a couple rough sketches planned out so i just might

NOCTURNIS

Chapter:16

Jul 18, 2025

To:Nato_otan1

Thanks for reading

NOCTURNIS

Chapter:0

Jul 13, 2025

I agree with you Arsenic, this chapter was my favorite so far, loved the small talks in the midst of the hell outside.! ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ what else can they do, just ride it out, also it kinda passed my mind that Michael was the only guy here until you mentioned it. Must have confused with that guy with the camera being part of the camera

THE BELLRINGER MAIDEN

Chapter:8

Jul 03, 2025

Jasmine is a lucky lucky girl, love the gore in this, horrific. Like the two in a bloody kiss was the one i remembered
this chapter ties in with the last one which i noticed you like to do a lot in your chapters, I kinda like it but maybe you could release the two chapters at the same time if that's the case so it can be understood better

THE BELLRINGER MAIDEN

Chapter:7

Jun 30, 2025

The backstory was pretty nice and i like Sasha and Tania, even Michael is not bad i guess. I'm interested to see how this story shapes up, there's great potential here

THE BELLRINGER MAIDEN

Chapter:2

Jun 30, 2025

Chilling chapter. Oh, man every those suits are a menace. they even killed a kid in coldblood. Man, No prologue this time i see, anyway great chapter i Can't wait to read the rest

THE BELLRINGER MAIDEN

Chapter:1

Jun 30, 2025

To:ArseNic AlucroN

Oh i see. They are coming soon...

KAWANGWARE STREETS

Chapter:17

Jun 25, 2025

Such a great chapter and I'm amazed at how evil Zengo truly is. Such a captivating character, i love this guy and I would love to know about his backstory.

KAWANGWARE STREETS

Chapter:18

Jun 25, 2025

Oh shit, This Zengo guy is a menace, like what the fuck man and Juma, defiant to the end. great chapter

KAWANGWARE STREETS

Chapter:17

Jun 25, 2025

Liked the new characters Like Lira, it was a great addition i think and i like the Sculptor too. Can't wait to actually meet him, i hope the details won't dissappoint.

HARMONIC CONVERGENCE

Chapter:18

Jun 03, 2025

solid chapter man. I liked it a lot.
Nice flow as always, liked wholesomeness with the Kitties. I like Serena but I feel like we haven't spent too much time with Lily. I feel she is always in the background, but Max and Lily specifically haven't spent too much time on their own.
Anyways, it was a nice chapter, also i'm missing the office-therapy shenanigans

THE DIARY OF A NORMAL LOSER

Chapter:17

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